I like how you've explored how things could have gone differently in this. I especially like how you keep Jake in San Diego and fix things for Freddy & Anna as well as himself, rather than sending him back to Jericho. I like that you show how he's trying to be that person he was in the future and not revert to bad habits. More than that, I like that he's trying to make everyone's lives better - Freddy's, Stanley's, his own. It's nice to see. While I would have like to see what it would be like for him when he goes to Jericho, I also like how you've ended it, letting us decide what happens. Lovely job.